Easy Writer had an announcement on her blog that was two-fold. It was her birthday but she seemed more excited about the news that caves have been found on Mars. Scientists have long anticipated finding caves on Mars, lava tubes formed by volcanoes, in which they might set up future human outposts on the red planet. EasyWriter asked for poems for her birthday and so I wrote this one, contemplating the possibilities. I hope she won't mind if I post it here as well - after all, a post is a post.
Artifacts
Deep within ochre walls,
A chasm of darkness.
Until that same light
That rouses sleeping Earth,
Slides neatly
Through ancient doorways,
Grazes the icy blanket
That once cooled forgotten fires
Where molten rivers flowed.
This is no Lascaux.
No artist lived to scrawl
His existence into the walls
of this desolate womb.
No figures play or die
across the surface of this hollow.
No scribe of antiquity
bequeathed sagacious scrolls.
In this cavernous outpost
Deep within foreign walls,
These new primitives are
Roused by the light as it
Slips into ancient cavities.
Their machines hum and whisper,
Their language a strange music
That echoes in the emptiness.
Their artifacts will wait,
For explorers yet distant.
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Artifacts
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Re: Artifacts
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easywriter
on Tue 02 Oct 2007 11:19 AM EDT | Permanent Link
Of course I don't mind. :o) It was a wonderful post and an amazing gift that should be shared with many readers. I have it up now on my blog too. I'm glad you found a title.
Re: Re: Artifacts
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Ned
on Tue 02 Oct 2007 11:23 AM EDT | Profile | Permanent Link
Thanks, easywriter. With my mind split amongst several blogs, poetry isn't easy to come by these days. I guess I needed a prompt, so thanks so much for providing that. I will remember where to go when I need a creative prodding.
Re: Re: Re: Artifacts
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easywriter
on Tue 02 Oct 2007 11:45 AM EDT | Permanent Link
Anytime ned. :o) and yes you do indeed deserve high praise. I, for one, am so glad you choose to share your wriing both poetry and prose. You are among the writier's I aspire to write as well as.
Re: Re: Artifacts
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Ned
on Sun 25 Nov 2007 09:32 AM EST | Profile | Permanent Link
Thank you, Wayne. It was lovely of you to stop and read.
Re: Artifacts
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blue
on Mon 30 Jun 2008 10:39 PM EDT | Permanent Link
love the poem and the caves in mars
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