Of what use then are hands untouching? Yet
Ready with reverent fingers they long
To hold the outline of a face, and with
Gentlest touch trace the lines there drawn
Join its story of joy and sorrow
And write a name on its tomorrow.
Of what use then are eyes unseeing? Which
Beholding not the image of desire
Instead through a shadowed view envision
That vessel which holds the means of fire
The lessons of a heart engulfed they learn
The cause of its flame and its call to burn
Of what use then are these things to love? That
Fitfully tosses dreams and walks the floor
In anguish it calls its beloved's name
In hope waits for a hand upon the door
Refusing the emptiness of its bed
Seeks now only a place to lay its head
|
|
||||||
nedful thingsThere are things that we need and things that are Ned. Nedfulthings: a collection of labyrinthine conversations and a fistful of dreams...WidgetBucks - Trend Watch - WidgetBucks.com
|
Of What Use Love?
Comments
Re: Of What Use Love?
by
ME Strauss
on Wed 19 Apr 2006 09:41 AM EDT | Profile | Permanent Link
There was not one extra word, not one light or missing feeling. This one is so real and so complete. I can't imagine that even the poet would want to change a thing about it. Bravo. To sit with it is like sitting in a field of flowers, saying "he loves me, he loves me not."
Re: Re: Of What Use Love?
Thank you Liz. It is good to know you could hear it so well.
Re: Of What Use Love?
by
Anonymous
on Wed 19 Apr 2006 05:34 PM EDT | Permanent Link
love is sometimes a fantasy not based upon reality
Re: Re: Of What Use Love?
Sometimes that is true. I think though, that love we create out of fantasy comes from our needs and desires and so is love for ourselves rather than another. To love in the face of stark reality requires our focus be changed from ourselves to the one loved. Humans are not very good at that.
Re: Of What Use Love?
Great to see new poems here. Really enjoy reading them.
- Liz ((Blue Sky Tavern) Re: Re: Of What Use Love?
Liz, it's always great to see you here, reading. :)
Re: Of What Use Love?
by
missy
on Sun 07 Dec 2008 10:08 PM EST | Permanent Link
...i believe my pupils dilate upon reading this.
|
The Poet is like an onion - because when you cut him, he makes you cry.
Recent Articles
______________________
Your Comments are welcome.
Overblown praise is also much appreciated
and truthfully, even a little insincere
flattery would not go amiss.Month Archive
F1 Insight
|
||||
