I tried to write a Valentine's Day
poem but I couldn't decide on a theme - should it be funny? romantic?
historical? or perhaps, should I just write about the proliferation
of pudgy, winged children with arrows and explore the possibility that
this is a mutation brought about by environmental pollutants?
After a time spent in the eye-straining pink and red card stores, I
finally ended up with this:
I searched the aisles and the rows
of hearts and flowers and pretty prose
For words that said just what I meant
amongst the Hallmark sentiments
There were I "heart" you's everywhere
But does that say I really care?
When a bumper sticker thinks it's grand
To proclaim to "heart" the high school band
And those that "heart" horses and quilting bees
Make the heart's song a wilting wheeze
I needed a card that says that I comprehend
how rarely an acquaintance becomes my friend
When finally I spied just the right emotion:
"Congratulations on your promotion!"
Then while searching through my document files, I ran across this unfinished thing:
Do you see?
I have painted the room in sun-
washed colors, red and gold
I have made your bed
in tranquil tones
I have bathed you in moonlight
and lain beside you
I pulled the petals from the single rose
and made a halo on your pillow
Which reminded me of one of my favorite poems by Christopher Marlowe:
The Passionate Shepherd to His Love
Come live with me and be my love,
And we will all the pleasures prove
That valleys, groves, hills, and fields,
Woods, or steepy mountain yields.
And we will sit upon rocks,
Seeing the shepherds feed their flocks,
By shallow rivers to whose falls
Melodious birds sing madrigals.
And I will make thee beds of roses
And a thousand fragrant poises,
A cap of flowers, and a kirtle
Embroidered all with leaves of myrtle;
A gown made of the finest wool
Which from our pretty lambs we pull;
Fair lined slippers for the cold,
With buckles of the purest gold;
A belt of straw and ivy buds,
With coral clasps and amber studs;
And if these pleasures may thee move,
Come live with me, and be my love.
The shepherds's swains shall dance and sing
For thy delight each May morning:
If these delights thy mind may move,
Then live with me and be my love.
So, there you have a hodgepodge of Valentines, and you can choose from them.
I think I will just go eat
some chocolate-covered cherries and wait for a real holiday, like
National Quilting Bee Day or something.
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A Valentine's Grab Bag
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Re: A Valentine's Grab Bag
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Anonymous
on Mon 13 Feb 2006 02:26 PM EST | Permanent Link
I love the first one the most, I avoid commenting on alot of holidays but Valentines Day I avoid the most. I blame Halmark.
Janus Re: Re: A Valentine's Grab Bag
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Ned
on Mon 13 Feb 2006 04:44 PM EST | Profile | Permanent Link
It's not whom you blame but the act of finding a scapegoat that's important. Valentine's Day is really only a disappointment for most people, it generally seems to fall when you are not in a relationship or it measures the relationship you are in by the value of the gifts. There are Valentine cards for everyone you know right down to the paper boy. It's another meaningless holiday perpetuated by the commercial interests of card and candy companies.
On the other hand, a dozen roses never go amiss I think. Re: Re: A Valentine's Grab Bag
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glenni
on Tue 14 Feb 2006 06:27 AM EST | Profile | Permanent Link
Hallmark you might blame
but the florists are doing the same Lets face it, they are all in the game. btw 15 red roses could set you back $100 aus. I have many rose bushes here, does anyone want to buy from me. glenni Re: Re: Re: A Valentine's Grab Bag
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Ned
on Tue 14 Feb 2006 02:33 PM EST | Profile | Permanent Link
Glenni
This international friendship is starting to get hard. First I had to learn a new language: Australian. Now, I have to learn a new system of weights and measures. No, not the metric system, we can convert that with a pocket calculator. But who knew there were 15 roses in an Aussie dozen? Re: A Valentine's Grab Bag
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Anonymous
on Tue 14 Feb 2006 02:01 PM EST | Permanent Link
What better way to say I love you then sending flowers that will die in about a week if the cat doesn't eat them.
I agree though it's still a nice gesture, I even got roses yesterday. If the cat doesn't smash the vase when I am at work they will look very nice on my entertainment center. I hope by giving her the plastic they were wrapped in to chew on it will help control her urge to break and eat anything I don't have locked in a safe under control. Janus Re: Re: A Valentine's Grab Bag
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Ned
on Tue 14 Feb 2006 02:35 PM EST | Profile | Permanent Link
The real problem with roses is that they don't smell anymore. I blame the increasingly allergic and asthmatic society. They have bred all the fragrance out of roses and now they are pretty but let's face it, if you can't be overcome and faint from the heady scent, what good are they?
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