Eyes that once were steely purpose
Now tearful, unfocused by age and care,
And hands once strong and useful
To their work, now wring bony fingers
One over another, or brush at
The straying of white cotton wool.
A nurse, officially busy, hurries
Through mazes of chairs and her
White-haired duties and has not time
To stop and attend to the stories
Of each and every life that once lived
Somewhere on foot and ran past age
In its youthful indifference.
She doesn't hear the frail voice,
Struggling with conscience and mind
"Who pays my bill?" it calls out and
"Do you know?" From every pounding beat
Of steps she inquires, eager to find
An answer fit for eyes of purpose.
And hands that working a trade still,
Furiously wring out upon the tray
Then cover eyes, clouded and red-rimmed
As she cries "Who pays my bill?"
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Paying the Bill
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Re: Paying the Bill
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Anonymous
on Sat 27 Aug 2005 09:34 AM EDT | Permanent Link
Re: Re: Paying the Bill
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Ned
on Sat 27 Aug 2005 09:49 AM EDT | Profile | Permanent Link
I wonder if we walk past in fear, that the stories will remind us of ourselves, and show us our own mortaity.
Re: Paying the Bill
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Anonymous
on Sat 27 Aug 2005 10:56 AM EDT | Permanent Link
A wonderful poem Ned. Containing pathos for both your platers. Yet perhaps a reminder also to stop and listen and not rush indifferently past. A reminder too that walls that lock the mind inside can be far stronger than walls that keep the body locked in.
Glenniah Re: Re: Paying the Bill
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Ned
on Sat 27 Aug 2005 08:37 PM EDT | Profile | Permanent Link
I totally agree Glennie, the mind imprisoned is so much worse than any weakness of the body.
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ME Strauss
on Sat 27 Aug 2005 08:16 PM EDT | Profile | Permanent Link
This is such a beautiful reminder, Ned on so many levels. Our writer's group would have had a field day talking about the possilbe symbolism present. :) But taken simply the hand that *wring out upon the tray* and the *eyes, clouded, and red-rimmed" draw such a strong image pulling me into the room, bringing me into the mind of the woman, who is probably getting less well becausee of the practiced indifference of the staff. How sad that we stop seeing to shield ourselves from the emotional pain of others, because we could not handle everyone else's pain as well as that which is our own.
Gosh I didn't mean to make it sound dreary or depressing it is not--maybe I am. :( Time for some happy pills I think. Re: Re: Paying the Bill
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Ned
on Sat 27 Aug 2005 08:42 PM EDT | Profile | Permanent Link
Yes, Liz, you are right. I have worked in Nursing Homes and it is depressing but it can also be uplifting and enlightening. It is a symbol of her life and her character that her wish to make sure the bill is paid, and that she is not a freeloader is what is constantly on her mind. In the cacophany of such worries, expressed by so many, the nurse may not listen but must perform her duty and is not lacking in compassion.
I wish to understand them both. Thank you for your insightful comment, Liz. I am always pleased to hear your perspectives. Re: Paying the Bill
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Anonymous
on Mon 29 Aug 2005 09:14 AM EDT | Permanent Link
Reminds me of scenes I've seen back when I worked in a hospital. Old persons sometimes abandoned with no one to talk to. Sometimes that's just what they want, someone to talk to, like a person, not a burden thing.
- Liz, Blue Sky Tavern PS, I'm sorry for not visiting this blog more often... Re: Re: Paying the Bill
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Ned
on Mon 29 Aug 2005 07:45 PM EDT | Profile | Permanent Link
Hi Liz,
That is one of the nicest compliments I ever got, that you are sorry for not visiting. I do know how hard it is to get around to all the blogs one would like to have time to read, I am glad you found the time today. I also, should visit your blog and sorry that I have been remiss. I hope you don't mind if I put your URL here so that others may visit too. Good Luck with your writing and your submissions. For anyone who wishes to visit Liz go here to Blue Sky Tavern Re: Re: Paying the Bill
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Ned
on Tue 30 Aug 2005 07:22 PM EDT | Profile | Permanent Link
No need to be frightened Glod, you have lots of time yet. :)
Re: Paying the Bill
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Anonymous
on Tue 30 Aug 2005 03:54 PM EDT | Permanent Link
I've just been reading the previous comments (and your replies) on this thread, Ned and I just wanted to say that I think they're all really moving, perceptive and mature. It's really uplifting to see the medium being so intelligently used. It's not a bad poem either (he said with typical English understatement).
Ken http://strangerken.blogspot.com Re: Re: Paying the Bill
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Ned
on Tue 30 Aug 2005 07:26 PM EDT | Profile | Permanent Link
Thanks Ken. It's a sobering subject. I am happy to say my commenters are sharp and perceptive and really understood the feeling I hoped to convey and were able to see the scene, played out daily in homes and hospitals everywhere.
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