For if they do these things in a green tree, what shall be done in the dry? Luke 23:31
amongst green brethren
stands one dry, naked
and ashamed to bare
brittle arms to the wind,
sing
-ing creaks
plead
-ing but
no spring now
will cover, and now-dead
fingers in the earth
gather no
-thing
and no
-thing leaks
from wounds made by
or names of
those who once
loved in a green tree.
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In a Dry Tree
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Re: In a Dry Tree
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ME Strauss
on Tue 23 Aug 2005 04:10 AM EDT | Profile | Permanent Link
That poem and the story of your tree are so firmly burned as pictures in my mind. That is beautiful.
Thank you, Ned. I love trees. Liz Re: Re: In a Dry Tree
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Ned
on Tue 23 Aug 2005 05:17 AM EDT | Profile | Permanent Link
Thanks Liz. Funny thing is, I had already written this before I saw Mark's poem about his tree. I find that happens sometimes in the blogosphere, the same ideas emerging in different places at the same time. It is like a creative energy. So glad you liked this one.
Ned Re: Re: Re: In a Dry Tree
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Mark
on Tue 23 Aug 2005 09:41 PM EDT | Profile | Permanent Link
In praise of trees!
All hail mighty branch And root! Bigger in the memory Than ever were In time gone and living ever somewhere in my mind The creative energy you speak of continues! Re: Re: Re: Re: In a Dry Tree
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Ned
on Wed 24 Aug 2005 06:59 AM EDT | Profile | Permanent Link
You seem to be in poetry mode Mark, I know how that can be. Sometimes I want to post something else but poetry keeps coming out over and over. It is a weird thing, don't you think? Kinda takes over.
Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: In a Dry Tree
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Mark
on Wed 24 Aug 2005 12:22 PM EDT | Profile | Permanent Link
That is very much where I'm at right now. Try as I might I just can't break free yet. Must. Resist. Urge.
Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: In a Dry Tree
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Ned
on Wed 24 Aug 2005 06:43 PM EDT | Profile | Permanent Link
Mark, do resist the urge to follow too many of those poetry links or blogs. You are much better than most of them are and we don't want you to pick up bad habits before you hit your stride. If I were really selfless I would tell you not to read my poetry either to avoid bad influences, but I need the traffic.
Re: In a Dry Tree
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Anonymous
on Tue 23 Aug 2005 03:43 PM EDT | Permanent Link
Glod says: Did you kill a tree Ned?
Re: Re: In a Dry Tree
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Ned
on Wed 24 Aug 2005 06:41 PM EDT | Profile | Permanent Link
Hey Glod, there were about 20 of those spam comments, all from the same IP which is now added to my firewall, I get them occasionally.
I deleted your comment too before I noticed you weren't one of the spam comments, there were so many it was like rote: click, delete, click, delete... This email is only for the blog, thank goodness, and thank goodness for email comment notification. Thanks for looking out for me buddy. Re: In a Dry Tree
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Glod
on Tue 23 Aug 2005 03:47 PM EDT | Profile | Permanent Link
Glod ponders: Why does my computer do that to me? Why?
Re: Re: In a Dry Tree
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Ned
on Tue 23 Aug 2005 05:54 PM EDT | Profile | Permanent Link
I will remove the double posting Glod, and no, I haven't killed a tree recently. I did just lose a hardy houseplant to neglect, but on the bright side, the children and the bird are still alive.
Re: In a Dry Tree
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Spiderbeavis
on Tue 23 Aug 2005 11:01 PM EDT | Profile | Permanent Link
If a tree dies in the forest, can you hear it scream? Not if it dies of numbness...great imagery Ned!
Spiderbeavis, anxious for more wise commentary on his site from Ned and all her fine visitors :-p Re: Re: In a Dry Tree
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Ned
on Wed 24 Aug 2005 07:03 AM EDT | Profile | Permanent Link
Numbness is the slowest way to die, it's almost as bad as not being numb for the slow process that dries you out and leaves you brittle and fragile. And what escape could be made with a match...
Re: In a Dry Tree
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Anonymous
on Sat 27 Aug 2005 09:20 AM EDT | Permanent Link
Re: Re: In a Dry Tree
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Ned
on Sat 27 Aug 2005 09:34 AM EDT | Profile | Permanent Link
True Janus, there is always mortality. Carving initials is a way to try to achieve some immortality, to always be part of something but as you say, even the redwoods eventually fall.
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