My wheels spin away from new constructions,
Mansion monstrosities planted amongst
the dots of settled two-storied dwellings.
Where stony-faced lions guard the gated way.
No tresspassing foot treads landscaped nature,
These slide into the distance as the road
now is carved around the watchful trees;
suspiciously eyeing the intruders,
limbs reaching out, mournful they stand alone.
The road runs through the years, past the fields stripped
bare of corn. The spent soil turned over and
caressed by dew to deep brown, a carpet
of jeweled patterns in red and gold
those gifts of autumn bequeathed by the trees.
The road twists and turns, the crests rise and fall
into other worlds I dare to traverse.
A portent in the early morning mist;
It gathers like a cloud that fell from grace
Hangs low and points into the distance
long and thin like an accusing finger
at this incongruous abandonment.
Along a neat row of the disconnected
discarded,dark screens line up for a show.
They dot the edges of the lonely road.
Air conditioners though lying broken,
still have power to change the atmosphere.
No wonder the trees watch through knotted eyes.
There is no escape from this creature, man.
Between two poles a tattered net stretches
like some ancient ruin of a clothesline.
And at the edge of the now missing crop
stands a chair, empty. Perhaps it is held,
waiting for the invisible scarecrow,
The shadow image of the intruder.
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Developing the Land
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Re: Developing the Land
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Anonymous
on Thu 10 Nov 2005 01:00 PM EST | Permanent Link
Re: Developing the Land
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Ned
on Thu 10 Nov 2005 08:31 PM EST | Profile | Permanent Link
Oh it can be new and different garbage every day but appliances like these cannot be thrown out unless you pay the facist town government a fee. These show up most often. Since it appears to be state-owned farmland, they come and clear them away quite regularly. Which means these people successfully ducked the fee.
Re: Developing the Land
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Anonymous
on Fri 11 Nov 2005 06:51 PM EST | Permanent Link
"The road runs through the years ... " and the view doesn't improve, does it? The more we consume, the more mess we make. In England, we call it fly-tipping, but it amounts to the same thing, endless supplies of fresh garbage dumped in pretty places along quiet roads where no one sees the culprits doing it. Your image of the solitary chair right at the end is very strong and the entire poem ripples with the undercurrent of your rage: spent soil, twists and turns, portents, ancient ruin. Maybe "abandonment" sums it all up?
Ken http://strangerken.blogspot.com Re: Re: Developing the Land
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Ned
on Fri 11 Nov 2005 07:45 PM EST | Profile | Permanent Link
It's surreal. That is really the only way I can describe it, Ken.
Re: Developing the Land
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SilverMoon
on Tue 15 Nov 2005 01:17 AM EST | Profile | Permanent Link
Intruder- yes...
(I'm brain dead so no new insights will illuminate this page,but I hate to leave without letting you know that your poetry is profound!) Re: Developing the Land
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garnet
on Wed 16 Nov 2005 10:16 PM EST | Profile | Permanent Link
Ned-I've come back several times now. This is hard to comment on, for some reason. The irony of the title sets it up. Man's shameful havoc is devistating seen through the knotted eyes of the trees. And the empty chair in the end is perfect. The rest is, well, poetry.
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