Now the tale of Rapunzel has been told on this wise: that a wicked
enchantress kept her hidden and locked in a tower and so she awaited
rescue by a handsome prince. But this is, as most fairy tales
turn out to be, not entirely true.
There was no enchantress, this was an invention of the myth that
followed the discovery of Rapunzel. For people will embellish and
romanticize and as the story was told over and over, imaginations added
to the truth until the life of Rapunzel became a story told to young
girls who dreamed of princes, when the time came for them to lay their
heads upon their pillows and dream the dreams of young girls.
Rapunzel did not always live in a tower of stone. She lived
in a village, a quite ordinary village of quite ordinary people.
Had she been ordinary, she would have been quite ordinarily happy
there. As Rapunzel grew, she realized that the thoughts of
these people were not her thoughts, their concerns did not hold her
interest and she spent her days alone and pondering the empty spaces
inside her that she could not fill with stories of whose cow had the
hoof and mouth or whose farm had produced the most corn or even which
proud wife of which proud husband had produced the prize winning jam at
the village fair.
Rapunzel went far into the woods on those days when the voices grew too
loud and pounded in her head. The crowded, noisy village made her
lonely; and she went to a secret spot near a small pond, where she read
and wrote in her journal.
There was a peaceful busy-ness to this place. The birds carried on
their coded conversations and their songs held more meaning for her
than all the words that she had ever heard.
One day, as she wrote in her journal of the visions she saw drawn in
the sky, the wispy dreams that floated past the sun, a voice behind her
startled her out of her reverie. That was the day she first met him.
He stood there, with the day's dying sun settling on him like
burnished gold. His eyes had the color of the mist that
rose from the water in the early morning. His voice sounded like
the music from a distant land, and called her away into him.
She met him there, day after day, travelling by his words into worlds
she had not known, and her discontent with her village life increased
tenfold. Each day she awoke, full of anticipation of him, and
travelled to meet him until that one day when he did not arrive.
The next day felt his absence too, and the day that followed that, and the day that followed that.
Soon, she stopped returning to the village even at night. She
built a shelter, a make-shift thing at first but as days went on and
became weeks, she built in earnest, gathering stones and constructing
walls.
In time she had built a strong tower with but one window that
overlooked her beloved place. She watched the mist rise from the
water in the morning and knew his eyes, she saw the sun go red and gold
in the late afternoon and knew his face and she listened to the song
the birds sang to their mates, her heart struggling to sing with them.
Now, in this time, Rapunzel's hair grew long and thick and she braided
it into a strong plait of gold (yes, you see, this part is true). It
happened one day that a passing traveller on horseback came by her
pond, and seeing the tower called out for any sign of a resident.
Rapunzel leaning out of her window, so enchanted the fellow that he
begged her to allow him entrance. Amused but slightly irritated
at his insistence, she acquiesced but playfully lied and told him the
only way to gain access was to climb up her braid, which she let fall
down out of the window. It was long enough now that it reached to
the top of his horse's head (which stood 15 hands). The fellow was game and
did indeed climb her golden staircase of hair.
His company wore thin after just a short time. Her words
fell on closed ears, he heard nothing of her and knew her not, he saw
her visage only and insisted that she be as he imagined her to be from
what only his eyes could perceive. He was no more than those she knew in the
village, and she sent him away.
Her heart knew only one, and he did not return.
But word spread now, throughout the countryside, of the beautiful girl who lived in the tower and more came to find her.
They came and stood under her window, begging for the golden
staircase to be let down to them. Each proved more unworthy than the
last, although occasionally one would tempt her heart, she would always
find he was not true and could not see her as she truly was.
The constant invasion of her chosen seclusion became so onerous that one
night, in a moment of utter despair and heartbreak, she took scissors
and cut off the means of connection to the world below. Rapunzel
took the braid and wrapped it carefully, for if he ever came, she would
have it ready for him. But when others appeared at her window
now, she would show herself, shorn and with her face contorted.
She would cry out as one mad and frightened them all so that
eventually, only the bravest of the village children on a dare came to
see her. Word of the mad Rapunzel in the tower spread like a
fairy tale through the land.
And so it was, that is how they found her many years later. Sitting by
her window, where she had watched the mist come up in the morning, and
had watched the sunset in the evening, waiting for the one who owned
her soul. The unused ladder lay beside her. Stacks of journals
she had written, of the one whose love she longed for, told her
story. But those who found her were not able to read and
understand, and the stories of Rapunzel sprang up as different and
plentiful as there were voices to tell them. The one that lasted
the longest is the one you hear even today.
Yet her journals still exist, they wait to be read and
understood. And here and there, now and again, one who has loved
will read them and understand.
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Rapunzel : The True Story
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Re: Rapunzel : The True Story
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Anonymous
on Sat 10 Sep 2005 10:37 AM EDT | Permanent Link
Throughout the years stories are told and myths arise shrouding them in mystery. Yet those who have the key will always be able to unlock the truth within. I loved the wisdom in this poem, Ned. Glennie ps I did think all those who were second best were rather brave tho to climb up on her hair like that Re: Re: Rapunzel : The True Story
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Ned
on Sat 10 Sep 2005 10:48 AM EDT | Profile | Permanent Link
LOL, well you know how men are... always showing off.
Well you see, the problem with fairy tales is that they just are not true. Although some of the gorier ones sound plausible, I think. The magic is inside people, that which makes them memorable. And we don't need witches and magicians to lock us in towers or to make wishes come true. We have all of that inside ourselves. Re: Rapunzel : The True Story
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ME Strauss
on Sat 10 Sep 2005 06:59 PM EDT | Profile | Permanent Link
Ned, the story and the comment above go to prove that you're much better reading than any of those male fairy tale writers--or the male fairy tales I have met. :)
Re: Re: Rapunzel : The True Story
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Ned
on Sat 10 Sep 2005 08:00 PM EDT | Profile | Permanent Link
Thanks Liz, it was one of those ideas that came from an odd place as a friend and I discussed how many movie and book titles come from nursery rhymes. Sometimes I wonder if fairy tales don't have some basis in the lives of real people.
Re: Rapunzel : The True Story
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Anonymous
on Sun 11 Sep 2005 05:45 AM EDT | Permanent Link
I always thought fairy tales are stories that are meant to teach the listeners something. Passed down through the ages, many of them are probably not what they were originally, which may explain why some of them seem like nonsense.
I like your twist on this. It's relevant to the times. The reference to journalling - I was just watching this documentary the other day about cyber culture in Korea (Korea has the largest number of broadband internet subscribers in the world). There was this bit about people keeping journals and building their own online "homes". There are these websites that provide tools for people to build their own virtual 'house' in a virtual community world. And one of programmers they interviewed commented that, some people have gotten so obsessed with this that they spent all their time in cyberspace journalling and updating their virtual homes, instead of journalling from living in the real world. I think those people are the Rapunzel in your version. - Liz (Blue Sky Tavern) Re: Re: Rapunzel : The True Story
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Ned
on Sun 11 Sep 2005 06:28 AM EDT | Profile | Permanent Link
An interesting thought Liz, about the journal. I always had notebooks around me, scribbling thoughts, poems, doodles and little sayings only I had the key to. Perhaps inside my writing is my own little tower. Maybe that is what all the blogging is about, perhaps we are all mad in our towers, writing out our thoughts and here and there is someone who understands them.
But I really don't like the idea of a tower, not keen on heights. Well, falling from heights really... Perhaps a cave would suit me better. Re: Rapunzel : The True Story
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Anonymous
on Sun 11 Sep 2005 11:03 AM EDT | Permanent Link
The story was wonderful. I told the old version to my children long ago. Now I will tell the true story to my grandchildren. Everyone has a different twist to every fairy tale but I must say you should look into some of them and tell the true story.
Re: Re: Rapunzel : The True Story
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Ned
on Sun 11 Sep 2005 11:13 AM EDT | Profile | Permanent Link
Thanks anonymous friend. Glad you told me you commented or I would not have known it was you Moe. I think your granddaughter might like this version better but the boy might prefer the gory version where the prince gets his eyes pierced by thorns and goes blind. Boys are like that you know.
Bring the kids down someday and we will sit and tell them stories that scare them, I got a million of 'em. ;) Re: Rapunzel : The True Story
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ME Strauss
on Sun 11 Sep 2005 11:04 AM EDT | Profile | Permanent Link
I with you on the cave versus the tower question, Ned. Give me the cave any day, but could we have a sizeable space in my room inside the cave? I'm a bit of a claustrophobic and it makes me a bit kvkllqqqrf if the walls are too close. Do that and I'll keep the place stocked in notebooks and journals. Lord knows I have a supply. :)
Re: Re: Rapunzel : The True Story
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Ned
on Sun 11 Sep 2005 11:16 AM EDT | Profile | Permanent Link
Oh caves can be made quite comfortable I hear. Or we could just give it all up and there is always the Holiday Inn. Can't beat a complimentary continental breakfast and a place to plug the hair dryer in.
I used to love having reams of fresh paper and pens about me. Now I think I am tied to my keyboard. It's good for writing out thoughts but a little harder to doodle on. Re: Rapunzel : The True Story
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ME Strauss
on Sun 11 Sep 2005 12:19 PM EDT | Profile | Permanent Link
Oh , sorry. Don't mind me. I thought I left my qrlflfxq here when I last commented.
Re: Re: Rapunzel : The True Story
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Ned
on Sun 11 Sep 2005 12:22 PM EDT | Profile | Permanent Link
Hehe... even now she doesn't realize I have been pilfering Word Verifications off her blog all day... soon I will have the code to blow this whole blogosphere wide open.. mwaahaahaahaa
Re: Rapunzel : The True Story
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garnet
on Sun 11 Sep 2005 01:33 PM EDT | Profile | Permanent Link
If only Rapunzel had a blog! Then she would have met others like her with which to share her isolation.
As you said, we all have a little Rapunzel in us. Re: Re: Rapunzel : The True Story
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Ned
on Sun 11 Sep 2005 01:54 PM EDT | Profile | Permanent Link
Well, I have been called "mad" and certainly I have been known to scare people. Blogging is many things to many people, but I think it is what keeps some of us sane.
Thanks for dropping in Garnet. :) Re: Re: Re: Rapunzel : The True Story
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garnet
on Tue 13 Sep 2005 12:22 AM EDT | Profile | Permanent Link
That's what I get for not reading the comment thread! Serves me right.
Sincerely, Redunzel Re: Re: Rapunzel : The True Story
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Anonymous
on Tue 13 Sep 2005 06:36 AM EDT | Permanent Link
Well said Garnet.
Blogging does so well and is needed in so many ways. Otherwise why would be here. Re: Re: Re: Rapunzel : The True Story
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Anonymous
on Tue 13 Sep 2005 06:38 AM EDT | Permanent Link
btw I am most certainly not anonymous. I am glenniah
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Ned
on Wed 14 Sep 2005 12:28 AM EDT | Profile | Permanent Link
I cannot imagine you ever being anonymous, just the laugh would give you away.
Yes, you and Garnet are right. Blogging is certainly one of our time's best ways for everyone to feel part of something and tohave their voice heard. Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Rapunzel : The True Story
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garnet
on Thu 15 Sep 2005 12:23 AM EDT | Profile | Permanent Link
I love this, there are now five Re:s in this comment title!!
Did anyone get my intended Redunzel spelling (for repeating an already made point)? Or is it just so silly as not to be noticed. Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Rapunzel : The True Story
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Ned
on Thu 15 Sep 2005 05:34 AM EDT | Profile | Permanent Link
Yeah? Well I got six Re:'s now. ;)
I just didn't want to be redunzel and mention it. ;) Re: Rapunzel : The True Story
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Mark Cross
on Sun 11 Sep 2005 05:47 PM EDT | Profile | Permanent Link
" but I think it is what keeps some of us sane."
And makes some of us not. :) Re: Re: Rapunzel : The True Story
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Ned
on Sun 11 Sep 2005 06:03 PM EDT | Profile | Permanent Link
But no one knows which are the sane ones and which are not.
Okay, so I know most are guessing me in the "not sane" group. Hey, at least I got a lot of votes of confidence on something... |
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