He noticed the creature a long time before he made his plan to capture
it. At first, he was intrigued by its quiet movements, the
unobtrusive way it lived within the woodwork, coming out only when it
felt safe and unobserved. Its nocturnal excurions into his world
fascinated him, there was a beauty in its fear as its cautious eyes
probed the darkness. He took a certain pleasure in crouching in
the dark corner, still and undetected by the creature. Night
after night he sat in silent observation, noting its movements, and its
timid exploration.
He didn't know quite when the idea to capture it came to him. It
seemed to slip into his mind the way the moonlight slipped through the
slats in the blind in the window over the sink. It lay across the path
of the creature, forcing it at times to walk through an illuminating
slice, a danger to its stealth. He waited for those moments, and
his fascination with the creature's habits continued to grow.
He began slowly. He marked paths across the floor with tidbits
and crumbs. A few at first to see if the creature would
follow. He was pleased that it seemed interested in what he had
left there, and he manoeuvered its path towards the light a little more
each evening, drawing the creature closer to his hiding place with
every seeding. The first time he lured the creature close enough
to see him, he had inadvertently moved too quickly and sent it
skittering off back into its hiding place and it did not return that
evening. He began again and painstakingly. It may have been
a few weeks or longer, he did not know, that he sat in that dark corner
watching the creature's approach; never moving, until its confidence in
the safety of his presence was won.
He was content to sit alone in the dark hours and wait for it to
emerge. He increased the light reaching his corner by tiny
amounts over a long period of time. He did not do this for the
benefit of the creature, whose eyes perceived all it needed to know in
the blackness and who understood without seeing, the dangers inherent
in this human domain. The creature was beautiful in the complexity of
its interactions, the simplicity of its acceptance of him. He
simply wanted to watch it and see that it could learn to trust
him. For some reason it was this trust that drove him forward in
his plan. It was this trust he had purposely engendered that held him
prisoner to the creature and he must break free.
The trap was easily set. A few of the usual and expected tasties
placed in a path that led to it. He placed the trap near him, where it
was dimly illuminated. He didn't even know why he was doing it.
The power? The control? Whatever it was it was exhilarating. A
sliver of moonlight crept across the floor and glinted off the steel
sprung gate. The bait set, he sat and waited.
His breath came in ragged intervals and he tried to regulate the
pounding in his chest, the anticipation collected on his face in beads
of cold sweat and dripped into his eyes; the salty drops stung and a
knife-like pain went through his chest at the moment just before it was
too late.
The creature emerged near midnight. The device was a new item, an
addition to its usual surroundings but the bait was familiar and
enticing. A tentative step towards it and no danger was sensed. A
certain boldness had been birthed in the creature, going against its
natural inclinations. He had given it confidence in his presence
that was contrary to its instinct, anathema to survival. It took
an easy step to the expectation created in it and a delicate foot on
the trigger tripped the spring. The blow was crushing in
intensity, caught at the neck, yet alive, it struggled.
He was transfixed at first by the desperation in its eyes, the futility
of its battle to live. There was a exquisite beauty in its
expiration. He had a brief desire to free it, but he knew it
would be in vain. He could not return its life to it. Then
waiting was ended, the deed done and suddenly, the sight of his
destruction filled him with revulsion; the gruesome portrait of death
by his hands. He picked it up and threw the mouse, still bound in
the trap, into the trash bin where its pleading eyes could not haunt
him.
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Anonymous
on Sun 21 Aug 2005 09:12 AM EDT | Permanent Link
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Ned
on Sun 21 Aug 2005 09:27 AM EDT | Profile | Permanent Link
I never trapped anything and I probably wouldn't kill a mouse. I am happiest when creatures stay in their environments and I stay in mine and we never have to meet.
Thanks for the compliment Janus. Re: The Waiting
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Mark
on Sun 21 Aug 2005 05:55 PM EDT | Profile | Permanent Link
Girl how you paint a picture with your words.
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Ned
on Sun 21 Aug 2005 06:04 PM EDT | Profile | Permanent Link
Thanks Mark,
I consider that a great compliment, especially coming from a talented writer such as yourself. Re: The Waiting
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zazzafooky
on Sun 21 Aug 2005 06:21 PM EDT | Profile | Permanent Link
I love these kinds of stories. Very Dahl-ish. I'm here via Michele's this time but definitely staying.
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Ned
on Sun 21 Aug 2005 06:33 PM EDT | Profile | Permanent Link
Thanks zazza, what a great compliment! I will have to thank Michele, that was a great idea with the comments and I saw a few new sites myself.
Re: The Waiting
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flyinfur
on Mon 22 Aug 2005 11:52 PM EDT | Profile | Permanent Link
My cat used to bring them into the house as "presents" -- unlike most cats, he didn't kill them. Nothing quite like a live mouse racing over your foot and into your room...
I have difficulty even with the live traps. Jodie Re: Re: The Waiting
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Ned
on Tue 23 Aug 2005 05:21 AM EDT | Profile | Permanent Link
Jodie,
We had a mouse at work that dug up all the potted plants and every so often scurried by some surprised cubicle occupants. I know they hired someone to get rid of it (them) but luckily I never had to witness it. Ned |
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