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The Man Behind the Curtain - The End
"And now, it is time that I must go". The Wizard began folding up his stage, packing up the puppets in a trunk. An enormous wave of fear and sadness washed over me and fell out of my mouth in a panicked voice. "Where are you going? Why must you go? What am I to do now?" "I have only one thing left to show you. Walk with me". We walked for a short time until we reached a place where the brick road that we had traveled for so long suddenly ended. "This is where your new journey begins", he said. "How may I journey?", I asked. "There is no road." "You must now build a new road. You have your companions with you now to assist you. You are not alone on this journey, and when you have all built the road together you will find the place you are meant to be." "And you will go where?" "I will be where I am always, in the background, in the shadows, behind the curtain. You will not see me, but I will have my voice to speak." "Why must I always be sent on journeys? They are all safe here, why can they not all stay here?" "That will not do", was the only reply he made. We walked in silence back to the caravan, but my mind was busy formulating objections and arguments. I had not wanted to come here, but now I felt I did not want to leave. "We will not know which way to go", I said. "Why do you not come with us?" "I cannot make this journey for you, it is one you must complete on your own. You will find what you need in your companions, and soon you will forget about me. I am only a catalyst, the materials you need to build your road are in your possession now." He had closed up the stage and placed it on the caravan. I saw that he intended to go and nothing I said was persuading him otherwise. "But where will I be when I reach the end? Tell me what awaits me so that I may travel in hope." "Hope is what you will build with, and what you find at the end I cannot say. These are your dreams that will lead you onward, not mine." "And will I not see you again?", I asked. "I have journeys of my own to make, who knows where they will lead?" His face was as unreadable as always. I had a foolish idea to call my companions to help me persuade him and ran to call them to come. I was no more than a few steps when I realized it was too late. In an instant, he had gone. We camped that night in the spot where the caravan had been, a fire burning in place of the stage. We set off the next morning, each of us forever changed. I worked in earnest now, building my road of hope. The object of that hope remained elusive and unseen.
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Re: The Man Behind the Curtain - The End
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Gone Away
on Mon 20 Jun 2005 11:22 PM EDT | Profile | Permanent Link
So Dorothy does not return to Kansas but must begin a new journey of discovery. A wonderful story and a fitting end.
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Ned
on Tue 21 Jun 2005 09:33 PM EDT | Profile | Permanent Link
Thank you for the effort it takes to read all of it, and thank you for your kind comment.
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Anonymous
on Tue 21 Jun 2005 03:13 PM EDT | Permanent Link
Glod says: Does this mean we are back to poems? Please not poems. They give me nightmares.
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Ned
on Tue 21 Jun 2005 08:05 PM EDT | Profile | Permanent Link
I bet your nightmares would make interesting poems.
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Anonymous
on Wed 22 Jun 2005 04:36 PM EDT | Permanent Link
extraordinary. Oh, I just knew this was not the end of the road but that eentually she would have to go either left or right. I wonder which will she choose and where will it take her?
easywriter Re: Re: The Man Behind the Curtain - The End
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Ned
on Thu 23 Jun 2005 08:46 PM EDT | Profile | Permanent Link
I hope she finds her way. Left or right or straight ahead, as long as it is the road that leads to her destiny.
Thank you so much for reading and for commenting. This one took a lot out of me...phewww. Re: The Man Behind the Curtain - The End
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Anonymous
on Thu 23 Jun 2005 07:15 PM EDT | Permanent Link
I have been following this series and I love it. It gives me a lot to think about and I'll probably come back to it again and again in the future to gather more insight from it. Thanks for writing it.
- Liz (Blue Sky Tavern) Re: Re: The Man Behind the Curtain - The End
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Ned
on Thu 23 Jun 2005 08:49 PM EDT | Profile | Permanent Link
Liz, thank you so much for having read through, it turned out much longer than I had anticipated but often the characters lead us and not the other way around. I appreciate your comments greatly.
I hope you won't mind if I drop your URL link right here so others can pay you a visit. Blue Sky Tavern Re: The Man Behind the Curtain - The End
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Harry
on Sat 25 Jun 2005 10:57 AM EDT | Profile | Permanent Link
I really admire the way you took such a famous tale and boldly re-wove it, Ned. Predictable balanced perfectly against surprise. Just the right amount of twist.
Great personalized characterizations, too, although I thought the Wiz talks a bit like a Brit. :p Re: Re: The Man Behind the Curtain - The End
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Ned
on Sat 25 Jun 2005 11:23 AM EDT | Profile | Permanent Link
I think I was suffering a short bout of insanity while I wrote this Harry. It was a bit of a trip. ;) Does he sound like a Brit? I suppose I just wanted him to sound mysterious, impressive and pretentious.
Of course, Wizards are not real after all. On second thought, I am still suffering from insanity. Oh well. Re: The Man Behind the Curtain - The End
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Harry
on Sat 25 Jun 2005 12:59 PM EDT | Profile | Permanent Link
Hm. Na, he warn't the atypical stuffy Brit at all. And if yer insane, tell me, where did you purchase it? Is there an on-going sale? I have a small amount of savings I can let go...
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Ned
on Sat 25 Jun 2005 03:49 PM EDT | Profile | Permanent Link
Oh, it's definitely bargain basement insanity Harry, easily obtained I should think, it came quite cheaply.
No fancy schmancy high-toned insanity for me, oh no. Perhaps I should get a PayPal button for the blog and sell some shares in it. Trackbacks
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