It's too early. I don't know why I want to be awake this early,
there is nothing but darkness and the pounding rain. There is
nothing but the sense that the world has been given a coat of black
semi-gloss paint, slick and wet.
I wake with a chill that has settled deeply and won't be
dispersed. I wake to apparations of thoughts that did not escape
into dreams, but wait for my conscious acknowledgment. I don't
know which doubts to entertain first. They all dance and vie for
my attention. Each shows its neediness and works at appealing to
my sleep-drugged mind.
It doesn't matter which I choose, any of them sends my morning spinning
into a complete reassessment of my life and the decision to fix
everything. My resolve lasts only until the hopelessness falls on
me like a cold, dark rain.
I wander into the bathroom trying to find a light so that I can see my
watch and know the time. It doesn't matter what the time is, I have
been driven from my bed by an inner force and will not return
there. I wonder if I ever know the time, or how much time has
gone by, or how much is left and what I will pay for what I have wasted.
The face in the mirror seems familiar but unfocused. I see that the lines
on my forehead look deepest after sleep and realize that it is while I
tarry in unconsciousness that they are etched and carved. What is it
that I do or think or dream that leaves such marks of worry on my
face? Where is my rest? I sleep, but do I ever rest? I have a
brief thought of putting on some cream to soothe the dry skin and
smooth those lines of tension but instead I simply walk away from the
mirror. I cannot face the fear that is reflected there.
As I turn, I notice that lack of exercise is diminishing any tone
of muscles I had in my arms and shoulders and think I should go now and
do exercises in the morning; but instead I pour more coffee and go sit
at the desk in the dark corner, only to stare and try to bargain with
an unresponsive computer screen. The immobility emanates from my
spirit but my body acquiesces.
Something nags at my mind, something lurks beneath the surface of my
consciousness. It has clothed itself in shadows, it pokes a
finger and tickles a neuron, then hides again as if it were a game.
Perhaps this is the dream unremembered, perhaps it knows the story of
the lines. I try to will it into lines on the page but it slips
from my grasp and buries itself deeper into my subconscious.
I want to write, but the words have left me and I have nothing
but my coffee and my cigarette for company and no sound but the endless
echo of the pounding rain.
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Morning Echoes
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Re: Morning Echoes
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Anonymous
on Sat 15 Oct 2005 10:44 AM EDT | Permanent Link
Serious melancholy, Ned. Not a million miles from Desolation Row. You evoke both the moment and the mood superbly, especially in the final two lines. For those of us who write, there are such moments, when the words simply disappear and leave us feeling hollowed out.
Ken http://strangerken.blogspot.com Re: Morning Echoes
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Ned
on Sat 15 Oct 2005 10:57 AM EDT | Profile | Permanent Link
Hollow is a very apt word Ken. Some mornings are hollow.
Re: Morning Echoes
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splittinghairs
on Sat 15 Oct 2005 04:35 PM EDT | Profile | Permanent Link
hollow as one of my jack o lanterns.
I feel this way alot too, something about the moment I wake up and the moment I actually can focus makes me lose my ambition. I know I need to focus, do something, and get into shape, but after a coffee I go back to my normal self. I have written small novels in my head while I am at work, but I get home and my head hits the pillow and they are gone. Wow, sorry to comment so much, I guess that means I really liked it and I can relate. Keep it up Re: Re: Morning Echoes
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Ned
on Sat 15 Oct 2005 05:52 PM EDT | Profile | Permanent Link
Finding your normal self so you can go back to it, that is an accomplishment in itself Janus.
I keep looking but I don't know if I have a normal self. Re: Morning Echoes
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glenni
on Sun 16 Oct 2005 10:23 AM EDT | Profile | Permanent Link
Re: Re: Morning Echoes
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Ned
on Sun 16 Oct 2005 10:44 AM EDT | Profile | Permanent Link
I don't know what morning I wait for. I don't know when the words return.
Re: Morning Echoes
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Mark
on Sun 16 Oct 2005 10:44 AM EDT | Profile | Permanent Link
Oh my God this was good Ned! The images… I just don’t know what to say it was that good. I felt this one, deep. It’s haunting, dream-like, disjointed, gripping. God, it was just so very powerful. I have goose bumps. Awesome!
Re: Re: Morning Echoes
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Ned
on Sun 16 Oct 2005 02:12 PM EDT | Profile | Permanent Link
Thank you Mark. It is a good comment, to say it affected you. That is a compliment indeed.
Re: Morning Echoes
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garnet
on Sun 16 Oct 2005 11:19 PM EDT | Profile | Permanent Link
My comment is soggy wet, the ink runs the thoughts together in a gray mass of mush. How am I supposed to write now?
This is devistating, Ned. Don't do this to us too often, OK? Re: Morning Echoes
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Ned
on Sun 16 Oct 2005 11:40 PM EDT | Profile | Permanent Link
Ah but Garnet, sometimes this is me. And sometimes the wry posts are me, and the poems are me... there is no guarantee.
But what is a blog if not exposure? What is it to write if you can remain dispassionate and uninvolved? It isn't writing then, is it? Of course, this might not be writing either, but it is what I do. Re: Re: Morning Echoes
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garnet
on Mon 17 Oct 2005 04:11 PM EDT | Profile | Permanent Link
A writer cannot help being a writer no matter what he writes, but he also must remember the power he has over others.
good point about blogs and exposure. but not all blog posts are necessarily read worthy. that's the difficult question for me. to sharpen the edge while just being me. it's self-conscious and un-conscious simultaneously. Re: Re: Re: Morning Echoes
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Ned
on Tue 18 Oct 2005 06:03 AM EDT | Profile | Permanent Link
Garnet,
Is writing then a form of manipulation? Does the writer want to bend and shape the emotions of the reader? Do we want to reach into their souls, slice through their protective skins and expose their deepest feelings and fears and hopes and dreams? You betcha. As to your writing and being yourself. You have to be you, that is all any of us can be. And people know when we are being phony or fake. It's better to just be yourself. Re: Morning Echoes
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Anonymous
on Mon 17 Oct 2005 05:06 PM EDT | Permanent Link
I probably shouldn't come back to this post, Ned, but it struck me very forcibly and stayed in my mind right through the weekend, when, coincidentally, my wife and I were in London to see the "Self-Portrait: Edvard Munch by himself" exhibition of Munch self-portraits currently on at the Royal Academy of Arts. In the final gallery, looking at Munch's portrayals of himself towards the end of his life, I found myself standing in front of a painting entitled "Self-Portrait: The Night Wanderer" and your piece came immediately back to mind. I can't post it because of an aggressive copyright warning, but if you have a moment to seek it out online, I think you'll see why it struck me. It's filled with that insomniac hollowness you describe and the melancholy of an elderly, frail man wandering around his house, brooding, perhaps, about the paintings he won't do now. It's very moving.
Ken http://strangerken.blogspot.com Re: Re: Morning Echoes
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Ned
on Tue 18 Oct 2005 05:53 AM EDT | Profile | Permanent Link
Ken,
Well first of all, I can't say how flattered I am that the piece affected you that strongly and stayed with you. I did try to find the painting you mentioned, I found a lot of self-portraits but not that particular one. Having seen the others I can imagine it though, from your description. There is a certain haunted quality to all his self-portraits. I wonder, are all artists, writiers, poets, etc. just haunted people seeking a way to exorcise that which haunts them? I am not sure. I think maybe, it could be that they are not the only haunted ones, they are only the ones who have the eyes to see what it is that haunts them. Re: Re: Re: Morning Echoes
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Anonymous
on Tue 18 Oct 2005 05:30 PM EDT | Permanent Link
I think that's right, Ned. Unless you already know it, you might enjoy looking at www.neuroticpoets.com, a site which I happened upon recently and which focuses on the incidence of, shall we say, a degree of mental imbalance in poets. When you think of other creative types, though, painters and composers, for instance ...
Re: Morning Echoes
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SilverMoon
on Tue 18 Oct 2005 04:19 AM EDT | Profile | Permanent Link
This post seared into me. I'm not a morning person, but it's not the time of day, it's your feelings expressed. I think many of us are insomniac artistic souls connected by the labrynths of blogs. The images you wrote will stick with me especially the next time I dare to truly look in that mirror.
Re: Morning Echoes
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Ned
on Tue 18 Oct 2005 06:06 AM EDT | Profile | Permanent Link
Silver,
I agree about insomniac souls, even if we aren't truly insommniac it is a condition of our spirit that is always seeking and not sleeping. If we are honest, the mirrors we use on ourselves can be devastating. Re: Morning Echoes
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SilverMoon
on Mon 31 Oct 2005 08:45 AM EST | Profile | Permanent Link
Yes, they sure can. I work hard to keep my mirrors from shattering. Those expectations/reflections/distoritions are often overthought by those of us entangled in the balances beteen light and dark, illumination and shadow.
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